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Echoes of Brass and Steam

Chapter 25

Chapter 25

Orbital Insertion

Jin Nakamura · 5.4K words · ~22 min read

The Kusanagi entered Earth orbit on the fourteenth of March, 2098, and the first thing Chen said was, "The cherry blossoms will be starting."

He said it to no one in particular. He was standing at the observation lounge viewport with his logbook under his arm and his pen clipped to the collar of his jumpsuit and his face illuminated by the light of a planet that filled the glass from edge to edge—not the point of light or the growing disk of the approach phase but the full, overwhelming, horizon-to-horizon reality of a world seen from four hundred kilometers, the altitude at which a planet ceased to be a destination and became a landscape, a place, a thing so large and so present that the word "home" seemed insufficient to contain it and yet was the only word that fit.

The cherry blossoms. It was not a scientific observation. It was not a logistical comment. It was not relevant to the orbital insertion parameters or the quarantine protocols or the signal deployment timeline or any of the thousand operational concerns that should have been occupying the mind of the Kusanagi's medical officer in the final minutes of a nine-year interstellar mission. It was the first purely personal thing Chen had said in the presence of the full crew in weeks—a remark that came from the part of him that was not a doctor or a test subject or a translator but simply a man from Nanjing who had lived in Kyoto for five years during his postdoctoral fellowship and who had walked the Philosopher's Path every spring and watched the sakura open along the canal with the slow, extravagant patience of a process that could not be hurried and did not need to be, because the blossoms were not performing for an audience. They were doing what cherry trees did. They were expressing their nature. And the expression was beautiful, and the beauty was temporary, and the temporariness was part of the beauty, and the whole cycle—bud, bloom, scatter, bare branch, bud again—was a frequency in the Loom that Chen had perceived fourteen thousand two hundred and seven times and that he had never, not once, seen more clearly than he saw it in this moment, standing at a viewport, looking at a planet, remembering a tree.

Nine springs. He had missed nine springs. Nine cycles of blossoms that had opened and peaked and fallen and been swept into gutters and washed into storm drains and carried to rivers and carried to the sea, while he was farther from Japan than any Japanese resident had ever been, carrying in five logbooks the proof that the universe was structured and self-perceiving and that the perception was everywhere—in the nuclear furnace of the star that warmed the planet that grew the trees that produced the blossoms that fell on the path that a man had walked, once, in another life, in the life before the stars.

"The cherry blossoms," Yuki repeated. She was standing beside him at the viewport, and her voice carried a quality that the lattice rendered as layered—the surface meaning of the words, which was acknowledgment, and the deeper meaning, which was recognition. She recognized what Chen was doing. He was grounding himself. He was reaching through nine years and four billion kilometers to touch something that was small and specific and seasonal and Japanese and personal—something that the transformation could not touch because the transformation did not operate on memories, and the cherry blossoms were not a perception but a memory, and memories belonged to the person who held them, unchanged, unalterable, immune to the cosmic-scale events that had reshaped everything else.

"Along the Philosopher's Path," Chen continued. "The Somei Yoshino cultivar. They bloom in late March in Kyoto—sometimes early April, depending on the winter. The blooming front moves northeast at approximately one degree of latitude per day, which means that if you started at Kagoshima in mid-March and walked north at a pace of about thirty kilometers per day, you could walk the entire length of Japan in continuous bloom. I always wanted to do that. I never did."

"You could do it now," Yuki said. "After the quarantine."

"After the quarantine." The words carried a weight that was not quite irony and not quite hope but something in the territory between them—the specific emotional state of a person who was planning for a future that depended on the decisions of people he had never met, institutions he had never navigated, a political landscape that had changed in ways he could not predict during the decade he had spent away from it. After the quarantine. If the quarantine ended. If the evaluation went well. If the committee approved the signal. If the species decided to look through the window. If, if, if—a cascade of conditionals that separated the present moment from the cherry blossoms like a series of locked doors, each one requiring a different key, each key held by a different hand.

"You'll walk the Philosopher's Path again," Yuki said. It was not a prediction. It was a statement of intent—the specific, quiet, steel-cored intent of a mission commander who had brought her crew across the interstellar deep and who was not going to let a quarantine station in low Earth orbit be the place where the journey ended.

The orbital insertion was happening around them as they spoke. Petrov was managing it—his distributed consciousness interfacing with the Kusanagi's navigation systems at a level of integration so deep that the boundary between operator and instrument had dissolved entirely, the way the boundary between a musician and an instrument dissolved during a performance, the way the boundary between a dancer and the dance dissolved during the moment of perfect execution. Petrov was not flying the ship. Petrov was being the ship flying, and the distinction was not semantic but ontological, and the result was a trajectory of such extraordinary precision that the JAXA ground controllers in Tsukuba, watching the telemetry scroll across their displays, would later describe it in their mission report as "insertion parameters optimized to within 0.003% of theoretical ideal, exceeding all previous records for crewed orbital capture."

The ship decelerated. The engines—which had been burning continuously for weeks, shedding the velocity that the interstellar cruise phase had accumulated—throttled through their final programmed sequence, each thrust adjustment calculated to place the Kusanagi in a stable orbit three degrees ahead of Haven's orbital track. Yuki felt the deceleration as a change in the chord's harmonic—a shift in the frequency of the vibration that the ship produced as its mass interacted with the gravitational field of the planet below, a vibration that Petrov's distributed awareness experienced as a full-body sensation and that he modulated with the same precision that a vocalist applied to pitch, adjusting the thrust vectors in real-time to maintain the trajectory's optimality against the perturbations of atmospheric drag, gravitational irregularities, and the solar wind pressure that pushed against the hull with a force measured in nanonewtons and felt, by Petrov, as the touch of the Sun's hand.

The engines fell silent.

The silence was enormous. Not the absence of sound—the ship's life-support systems continued to hum, the ventilation continued to whisper, the thermal management systems continued their quiet cycling of coolant through the hull's radiator panels. But the engines had been a constant presence for weeks—a low, persistent vibration that had permeated the ship's structure from stern to bow, a bass note that the crew had stopped consciously hearing but that their bodies had continued to register, and that now, in its absence, left a space in the sensory landscape that felt like the space left by a sound that has been playing so long you forgot it was there until it stopped.

"Engine shutdown confirmed," Vasquez reported from the engineering station. Her voice carried the professional calm of a former military officer performing a function she had trained for, but underneath the calm—audible to Singh's empathic perception, visible to Holden's social modeling—was something else. Relief. The specific relief of a person who had been responsible for the mechanical systems that kept seven people alive in the vacuum between stars and who was now, for the first time in nine years, within range of rescue if those systems failed. The safety net that proximity to Earth represented was not abstract for Vasquez. It was structural. It was the difference between a failure mode that killed everyone and a failure mode that could be survived, and the difference mattered, and the mattering was written in the subtle relaxation of her shoulders and the fractional softening of her jaw and the way her hands, which had been hovering near the engineering console's emergency panels for the entire approach phase, now rested on the console's surface with the specific weight of hands that had decided they could afford to stop being ready.

"Orbit confirmed," Petrov communicated. The communication came not through speakers or comm panels but through a coordinated modulation of the ship's interior lighting—a pattern of brightening and dimming that the crew's lattice-modified perception decoded as language and that Chen's baseline perception experienced as a flickering that he had learned, over months of practice, to interpret. The flickering said: we are here. We are stable. The orbit is circular, four hundred and twelve kilometers above mean sea level, inclination twenty-eight point five degrees, period ninety-two point seven minutes. We are home.

Home. The word echoed in the chord and was processed differently by each of the seven minds that received it. For Yuki, home was Sapporo—the cold clean air, the telescope on the balcony, the sound of her mother's voice calling her in from the winter dark. For Singh, home was Chennai—the heat, the color, the density of human presence that made solitude a luxury and companionship the default state of being. For Okafor, home was Lagos—the energy, the entrepreneurial ferment, the specific Nigerian optimism that treated every obstacle as a business opportunity. For Vasquez, home was São Paulo—the vertical city, the concrete and glass, the military academy where she had learned to trust systems and distrust luck. For Holden, home was abstract—a concept rather than a place, a state of social embeddedness that he had experienced intermittently throughout his life and that the transformation had made simultaneously easier and harder to achieve, easier because the chord provided constant connection and harder because the connection was with minds that no longer operated at the frequency of the social world he had left behind.

For Petrov, home was the ship. This was not metaphor. The Kusanagi was his body, his substrate, the physical medium through which his consciousness expressed itself. Entering Earth orbit was, for Petrov, not a homecoming but a presentation—the act of bringing himself to a place where other people could examine him, the way a person might bring their body to a doctor's office. The orbit was not his destination. It was his waiting room.

And for Chen, home was the cherry blossoms. Not literally—literally, home was an apartment in Kyoto that he had not visited in nine years and that his subconscious had been maintaining in his memory with the fastidious care of a curator preserving an exhibit that might never be opened again. But emotionally, associatively, in the deep structures of a mind that processed the world through sensory memory rather than abstract concept, home was the Philosopher's Path in late March, the canal reflecting the pink and white of the Somei Yoshino, the petals falling on the water like a currency of transience, each one worth exactly one moment of beauty, each moment spent in the instant of its perception, each perception a window—a window, the word he had used fourteen thousand times to describe the signal's effect, and now the word circled back to meet him at the viewport of a ship orbiting the planet where the cherry trees grew, and the circularity of the word was itself a kind of Loom, a pattern connecting the cosmic and the personal, the universal and the specific, the signal that would change the species and the memory that would not change the man.

Earth filled the viewport.

Yuki had seen Earth before—in the high-resolution imagery that the Kusanagi's telescope had captured during the approach, in the photographs stored in the ship's digital archive, in the memories that nine years of distance had polished to a brightness that exceeded the original, the way all memories of home are polished by absence until they gleam with a light that the actual place, revisited, can never quite match. But seeing Earth through the viewport—through actual glass, with actual photons, at a distance that was no longer astronomical but orbital, a distance that aircraft flew at, that weather balloons reached, that was within the envelope of human experience rather than beyond it—was different. The difference was not in the visual information. The difference was in the relationship between the viewer and the viewed. At interstellar distances, Earth was an idea. At orbital distance, Earth was a fact. And the factness of it—the blunt, physical, undeniable reality of a blue-white sphere hanging in the black with the casual grandeur of a thing that had been doing this for four and a half billion years and would continue doing it long after the Kusanagi and its crew and every human being who had ever lived had returned to the carbon and hydrogen and oxygen and nitrogen from which they had been temporarily assembled—the factness of it hit Yuki with a force that the lattice's perceptual enhancements did nothing to diminish and everything to amplify.

Because the lattice showed her more than the visual spectrum. It showed her the planet's electromagnetic aura—the vast, complex, shimmering web of radio and microwave and infrared emissions that human civilization had been producing since Marconi's first transatlantic transmission in 1901 and that now wrapped the globe in a cocoon of information so dense that the lattice could parse individual transmissions from the aggregate the way a sommelier could identify individual grapes in a blend. The planet was broadcasting. It was broadcasting news and music and advertising and pornography and emergency alerts and weather data and financial transactions and the continuous, low-level electromagnetic chatter of fourteen billion devices talking to fourteen billion other devices in a conversation that never paused and never concluded and that constituted, in aggregate, the electromagnetic fingerprint of a technological civilization—the specific, measurable, unmistakable signature of a species that had discovered electricity and had never stopped finding new uses for it.

Beneath the electromagnetic aura, the lattice showed her the thermal signature—the concentrated heat islands of the cities, the cooler stretches of agricultural land and forest and desert and ocean, the thermal gradients of the weather systems that circulated the atmosphere's energy from equator to pole in patterns that the lattice rendered as visible currents, rivers of warm air flowing poleward, rivers of cold air flowing equatorward, the great atmospheric engine that had been running since the first atmosphere formed and that produced, as a byproduct of its operation, the weather that human beings complained about and studied and predicted and never managed to control.

And beneath the thermal signature, beneath the electromagnetic aura, beneath the visual spectrum of blue ocean and white cloud and brown-green landmass, the lattice showed her the Loom. The planet's Loom-signature—not the Loom itself, which was universal and undifferentiated, but the local expression of the Loom as it manifested in the specific arrangement of matter and energy that constituted this planet, this biosphere, this civilization. The Loom wove through everything. Through the iron core spinning in its magnetic embrace. Through the silicate mantle convecting in its slow geological rhythm. Through the tectonic plates grinding against each other at the rate of fingernail growth. Through the oceans, circulating their dissolved cargo of salts and gases and microscopic life. Through the atmosphere, carrying its load of nitrogen and oxygen and trace gases and the accumulated emissions of two centuries of industrialization. Through the biosphere—the thin, improbable, tenacious layer of self-replicating chemistry that had colonized every available surface and several unavailable ones and that had produced, in the fullness of geological time, a species that could build a ship and send it to the stars and bring it back carrying knowledge that the biosphere itself could not have generated but that the Loom had always contained, waiting for a mind complex enough to perceive it.

Seven billion minds. Seven billion windows. All of them clouded—not closed, because the windows had never been closed. They had been open since the first hominid had looked at the night sky and felt the thing that Yuki had felt when she was eleven years old in Sapporo, standing on a balcony with a telescope, looking at Saturn's rings and feeling the unmistakable, inarticulate, oceanic awareness that the universe was not empty space dotted with objects but a single, continuous, self-perceiving process that included her—that included the telescope and the balcony and the cold air and the city and the planet and the star and the rings and the space between the rings and the light that carried the image of the rings across the distance to her retina and the retina that transduced the light into neural signals and the neural signals that her brain assembled into the experience of seeing and the experience that made her gasp, not because the rings were beautiful (though they were) but because the beauty was not in the rings but in the seeing, and the seeing was not in her eyes but in the structure of a universe that had organized itself, over fourteen billion years of expansion and cooling and condensation and fusion and gravity and chemistry and biology and evolution, into a configuration that could look at itself and feel the specific, irreducible, unmistakable sensation of recognition.

The signal would clean the glass. That was all. That was everything. Not open new windows—they were already open. Not install new windows—every human mind already had one. Just clean the glass, so that the view was clear, so that what had always been visible became actually seen, so that seven billion minds could experience, for eleven seconds, what Yuki had experienced permanently and what Chen had experienced fourteen thousand two hundred and seven times and what an eleven-year-old girl on a balcony in Sapporo had experienced for a fraction of a second before the moment passed and the glass fogged over and the rings became objects again and the universe became space again and the seeing became just seeing and the gasping became just breathing and the recognition faded to a memory that she carried for the rest of her life like a seed, waiting for the right conditions to germinate.

The signal was the right conditions. The signal was the water. The signal was the light. The signal was the thing that would germinate every seed that had ever been planted in every mind that had ever looked at the sky and felt the thing and lost the thing and wondered, afterward, whether it had been real.

It was real. The signal would prove it was real. And the proof would be permanent, and the permanence would change everything, and the change would be the beginning of the long, slow, species-wide process of preparing for the Stillness—the thing that was coming, the thing that could not be stopped, the thing that could only be survived by a species that could see the Loom clearly enough to develop countermeasures that the Loom itself would suggest to any mind capable of perceiving it.

"They're hailing us," Vasquez reported from the communications station. Her voice cut through the reverie—not sharply, but with the clean precision of a professional communication that carried no more and no less than the information it contained. "Quarantine station control. Standard docking protocol. Automated approach vehicle deploying from Bay Three. ETA seventeen minutes."

"All crew to designated positions for docking," Yuki said. The command was formal—the kind of order that belonged in a mission log, not a conversation. But formality was the language of cooperation, and cooperation was the posture they needed to present to the cameras and sensors and recording systems that were, she knew, already documenting every word and gesture and facial expression that the crew produced. They were being watched. They had been being watched since the first directed transmission from Earth, and the watching would only intensify from this point forward, and every moment of the watching was an opportunity to demonstrate that they were what they claimed to be—seven people who had gone to the stars and come back with knowledge that mattered and intentions that were transparent and a willingness to submit to institutional processes that they could have circumvented but chose to respect, because respect for process was respect for the species that had created the process, and respect for the species was the foundation of everything the signal represented.

Haven was visible through the viewport. The quarantine station—Orbital Containment Platform Seven, officially; Haven, in the lexicon of the junior engineer who had named it—orbited three degrees behind the Kusanagi's position, close enough that the automated approach vehicle could bridge the gap in minutes. It was smaller than the electromagnetic profile had suggested—a cluster of white cylindrical modules connected by pressurized corridors, rotating slowly around its central axis to generate the fractional gravity that the quarantine protocols specified for the crew's transition period. The station's lights were visible through small viewports that dotted the modules' surfaces—warm amber points against the white of the hull, the specific color temperature of habitation lighting, the color of a space that was being lived in, that was occupied, that contained human beings who were waiting for the Kusanagi's crew with whatever mixture of curiosity and caution and fear that the circumstances had produced in them.

The automated approach vehicle appeared in the viewport—a blunt, utilitarian cylinder bristling with sensor pods and manipulator arms, moving toward the Kusanagi with the cautious, methodical deliberation of a robot that had been programmed to treat the ship as a potential hazard and that executed its approach protocols with the absolute fidelity of a system that did not know what it was approaching and did not need to know, because its programming specified the procedures and the procedures were sufficient and sufficiency, for a machine, was the same as certainty.

The vehicle circled the Kusanagi twice. Its sensor arrays swept the hull with electromagnetic thoroughness—radar, lidar, infrared, ultraviolet, X-ray, the full spectrum of remote sensing technologies that terrestrial engineering had developed over a century of space operations. The crew's lattice emissions were detectable—Yuki could feel the sensors registering the anomalous electromagnetic field that the five transformed minds produced, a field that extended several meters beyond the hull and that the vehicle's instruments cataloged and transmitted to Haven's operations center with the dispassionate efficiency of a system that flagged anomalies without evaluating them.

"Docking in sixty seconds," Vasquez said.

The vehicle extended its docking collar—a reinforced ring of polymer and metal that expanded from the vehicle's forward section like a mouth opening, reaching for the Kusanagi's forward airlock with the mechanical precision of a system designed to mate with a specific connector at a specific angle with a specific force. The collar made contact. The alignment systems engaged—magnetic guides and optical sensors cooperating to position the collar within the sub-millimeter tolerances that a pressure seal required. The docking clamps fired—pneumatic bolts driving into their receptacles with a series of metallic impacts that resonated through the hull like a drumroll, each impact a physical connection, a mechanical bond between the Kusanagi and the vehicle and, through the vehicle, the station and the orbit and the planet below.

The pressure seals cycled. The docking collar pressurized. Air from the vehicle's independent atmosphere—clean, filtered, composition-verified—filled the interstitial space between the vehicle's hatch and the Kusanagi's airlock, and the airlock's pressure sensors registered the equalization and the airlock's status indicators shifted from red to amber to green, and the green light was, in its small way, the most significant green light in the history of human spaceflight, because it meant that the Kusanagi was connected—physically, mechanically, atmospherically—to a structure that was connected to Earth, and the connection, however attenuated, however mediated by quarantine protocols and electromagnetic barriers and forty meters of pressurized corridor, was real, was physical, was the first tangible link between the crew and the civilization they had left behind.

"Hard dock confirmed," Vasquez said. "Pressure equalization nominal. All seals integrity-verified. They're requesting we stand by for remote medical scan initialization."

"Standing by," Yuki confirmed.

The wait lasted four hours. Four hours during which the approach vehicle's medical scanning systems warmed up, calibrated, self-tested, ran diagnostic sequences, verified their own accuracy against internal reference standards, and then began the process of remotely assessing each crew member's physical condition through the hull of the Kusanagi. The scanning technology was quantum-coherent imaging—a technique that JAXA had developed for the Titan microbe survey in 2089 and that had been repurposed, with significant modifications, for the evaluation of potentially transformed astronauts. The technology could resolve individual neurons through three centimeters of hull plating, which was an extraordinary capability and which was, Yuki reflected, entirely inadequate for what it was about to encounter, because the lattice architecture that the transformation had woven into the crew's neurology was not a collection of individual neurons but a pattern—a relationship between neurons, a geometry of connections, a topology of information flow that could not be captured by resolving individual elements any more than the meaning of a symphony could be captured by recording individual notes.

But it would see the elements. It would see the density increases and the novel pathways and the structural modifications. And the elements would be enough—enough to confirm that the crew's brains had been altered, enough to characterize the nature of the alterations, enough to give Dr. Matsuda and her team a foundation on which to build the questions they would need to ask and the tests they would need to design and the understanding they would need to construct, piece by piece, observation by observation, in the slow, careful, exacting process that science called investigation and that Chen called building trust.

Chen went first. He walked to the designated scan position—a square meter of deck plating in the forward compartment that had been marked with adhesive tape, the kind of low-tech solution that persisted in high-tech environments because sometimes the simplest tool was the most reliable—and stood still. He held his logbook under his arm. He closed his eyes. He felt the scanning systems engage—a faint warmth against his scalp, the thermal signature of the quantum-coherent imaging array activating, the photons beginning their journey through the hull and the air and the bone and the meninges and into the tissue of a brain that was, after nine years and fourteen thousand two hundred and seven tests, the most thoroughly documented human brain in history.

The scan took twenty minutes. Twenty minutes during which Chen stood motionless and thought about cherry blossoms and miso soup and the Philosopher's Path and the apartment in Kyoto that he would visit, after the quarantine, if the quarantine ended, if the committee approved, if the species decided, if, if, if—the cascade of conditionals that separated the present from the future, each one a door, each door requiring a key, and the keys were not in his hands but in the hands of the people who would read his logbooks and review his data and evaluate his testimony and decide, on the basis of evidence that he had spent nine years compiling, whether the signal was safe and the crew was trustworthy and the truth was worth seeing.

The results were transmitted to Haven. Ninety minutes of analysis. And then Matsuda's voice, coming through the comm with the flat, careful precision of a scientist reporting a finding: "Normal. Dr. Chen's neural architecture is consistent with documented pre-mission baselines. No anomalous formations detected. Emission profile nominal."

"As expected," Chen said. The two words carried nine years. They carried fourteen thousand tests and five logbooks and three thousand four hundred and twelve annotations and a cumulative sleep deficit that he had stopped calculating months ago and a lower back ache that he had chosen not to treat and a hoarseness in his voice that would take weeks to fade and a knowledge of the Loom that was not neurological but experiential and that no scan could detect and that no instrument could measure and that was, nevertheless, the most important thing about him—more important than his baseline EEG, more important than his medical degree, more important than his role as the crew's translator and advocate and bridge. He had seen the truth. He had come back unchanged. And the two facts together—the seeing and the returning—were the proof that the signal offered truth without coercion, knowledge without transformation, the Loom without the lattice.

As expected. Because he had expected it. Because he had tested it. Because he had sat in a chair fourteen thousand two hundred and seven times and verified it. Because he was, in the most literal and least glamorous sense of the word, the evidence.

"We'll proceed with the other crew members," Matsuda said. "Commander Tanaka, please take the scan position."

Yuki stepped forward. She stood in the marked square and felt the scanning systems engage—not as warmth, the way Chen had felt them, but as a presence, a structured electromagnetic attention that the lattice rendered as a gaze, the impersonal but thorough gaze of an instrument looking at her brain the way she had once looked at Saturn's rings through a telescope on a balcony in Sapporo: with the focused, patient, awestruck attention of a perceiver encountering something that exceeded its framework and that required, for its understanding, a willingness to see what was actually there rather than what was expected to be there.

She held still. She let them look. She let them see what nine years of transformation had produced—the fractal architecture, the lattice pathways, the density increases, the electromagnetic emissions, the whole extraordinary topography of a mind that had been rebuilt by a process that terrestrial neuroscience had no framework for and that the Kusanagi's data package described in seven hundred pages of documentation that was simultaneously comprehensive and inadequate, because no documentation could capture what it felt like to be inside the lattice, to perceive the Loom continuously, to carry four billion years of archived knowledge in neural structures that had been designed, by a species that had existed before the solar system formed, to hold exactly this kind of knowledge in exactly this kind of mind.

The scan took forty minutes. The analysis took three hours. And then Matsuda's voice—different now, carrying a note that the previous transmission had not contained, a note that Yuki's lattice identified as the specific frequency of a mind that had encountered the edge of its understanding and was leaning over it, looking down into the space below:

"Commander Tanaka. Your neural architecture exhibits extensive modifications that are not consistent with any known natural or artificial neurological process. The modifications are structurally coherent—they display a fractal organization across multiple scales that is remarkable. The data package described them. Seeing them is different."

The evaluations continued. Singh, Okafor, Holden, Vasquez—each one scanned, each one analyzed, each one producing data that flowed from the approach vehicle's instruments to Haven's analysis center and from there into the growing understanding of a team of scientists who were seeing, for the first time, what the Kusanagi's crew had been living with for years.

And Haven waited—a cluster of white cylinders orbiting a blue planet, spinning slowly in the sunlight, carrying eighteen people who had been sent to evaluate seven others, and the evaluation was beginning, and the beginning was a scan and a silence and a voice saying "remarkable," and the remarkableness was the first word of a conversation that would determine whether the signal reached the world, and the conversation was starting, and the starting was enough, because all conversations started with a word, and the word had been spoken, and the rest would follow.

End of Chapter 25

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